You know, I think this is my favourite chapter. The pain he's in is heartbreaking and you do such a terribly good job of showing that. The pain he must be in sounds excruciating! It's vivid and just...ow. I love how Jaden's Aussie accent takes this fic and makes it so Strictly Ballroom. This is awesome.
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Date: 2013-01-06 08:41 am (UTC)