I'm not even sure where to begin. I loved the whole thing.
Your description of the different couples was lovely, and very vivid.
Now the Serenity/Beryl interaction, TOTALLY UNEXPECTED and TOTALLY BRILLIANT. Her innocence, and Beryl's disguised hatred, just such an amazing juxtaposition.
Your Beryl is equal parts sympathetic and loathsome. That is an amazing balance.
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timeasmymeasure
Bravissimo
Date: 2010-07-12 04:08 am (UTC)Your description of the different couples was lovely, and very vivid.
Now the Serenity/Beryl interaction, TOTALLY UNEXPECTED and TOTALLY BRILLIANT. Her innocence, and Beryl's disguised hatred, just such an amazing juxtaposition.
Your Beryl is equal parts sympathetic and loathsome. That is an amazing balance.
This is brilliant work. Bravo!