Ditto to what V said. I'm sat here thinking, "Why didn't I ever think to have those two talk?"
It's a great progressive transformation from simple infatuation to desperate madness ending in utter loss. I like the end where you talk about her humanity being lost, because she did still have some, it was just being smothered by all her feelings of jealousy and hatred.
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Date: 2010-07-13 02:29 pm (UTC)It's a great progressive transformation from simple infatuation to desperate madness ending in utter loss. I like the end where you talk about her humanity being lost, because she did still have some, it was just being smothered by all her feelings of jealousy and hatred.
<3 it!